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Another emotional hit

Posted: November 15th, 2008 under Uncategorized.
Tags: Cirellio, Cyronil, Marrow, Mourn, Shanung, style, write, writer

Wow. I just wrote two very important scenes that ended up changing the lives of Shanung, Mourn, Cyronil, Eth, and Marrow in very profound ways. What’s wonderful is that the event tugs at heartstrings quite a bit. I remember this particular part making me blink out a few tears when it first came to me.

A new character is also introduced, a small ‘nameless’ boy from the 9th satrapy (the wall) who goes by ‘Lhasa’ (which means ‘place of the gods’ in Tibetan).

What’s funny about the name is it immediately reminded “G” of a certain Tibetan dog breed. LOL. Well, hopefully the character will be endearing enough to make readers forget about lhasa apsos. :P

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4 Comments »

  1. I had no idea that dog was called like this, so no worries, most people probably won’t even notice.

    Comment by packsister — November 16, 2008 @ 12:52 pm


  2. oh good, that’s a relief.

    Comment by cirellio — November 17, 2008 @ 5:09 pm


  3. Maybe you could work in a little something about the dog breed. Like a slight joke or something :P

    Comment by christopher. — November 21, 2008 @ 4:22 pm


  4. lol…like maybe Shanung could say, “Here, boy!” :P

    Comment by cirellio — November 21, 2008 @ 5:13 pm



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