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Posted: November 17th, 2008 under Uncategorized.
Tags: book, Cirellio, Cyronil, Marrow, Mourn, Shanung, style

I’m feeling guilty watching people type 50k words in a month, so I wrote a few more scenes. :P

1st – Lhasa joins up with Shanung, Eth, Mourn, Cyronil, and Marrow. They leave Shiira, sneaking out Lhasa who, since he is a nameless, cannot legally cross gates within the gates system, effectively becoming a rat.

2nd – This scene depicts what happened from Cirellio’s point of view within the relic house, and how Nevius died.

3rd – This is the heated argument between Cirellio and Morikel.

Here comes a candybar scene! ^__^

WC: 11,265

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4 Comments »

  1. I do envy you for the writing. Me, I’m still throat-deep in research. Can’t write without knowing my world, can I? But that is a difficult job, takes lots of time, while I would have loved to start writing something, too, already.

    Comment by packsister — November 17, 2008 @ 3:03 pm


  2. Don’t worry. I ended up worldbuilding and plotting for about 3/4ths of a year (with some false starts) before I was finally ready to write. I’m still worldbuilding as I go along, of course. And I pretend like the new stuff I create is stuff I knew all along ^__^;;;

    Comment by cirellio — November 17, 2008 @ 4:52 pm


  3. Nyehehehe, that’s still great. I don’t yet feel ready at all to start writing… Something is missing for me. So you go on writing, it makes me feel nice to see someone productive and creative.

    Comment by packsister — November 18, 2008 @ 3:28 pm


  4. ^__^

    Comment by cirellio — November 21, 2008 @ 5:12 pm



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