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NPI Day 3

Posted: March 3rd, 2009 under writing.
Tags: Cauinn, Cirellio, contest, fiction, NPI, poem, poetry, short story, style, write, writer, writing

Back again :)

So far, 384 words today, about Cirellio and Cauinn travelling to a small town called Javo.  They had a discussion where Cauinn reveals a bit about her past.

 

Just to let you know, I do plan to do an update post showing where everybody stands in the NPI on day 5 (and pretty much every five days).

 

So anyway, I went to hear Steve Davenport yesterday. It wasn’t quite what I expected.

He made it clear to us he’s a dyed-in-the-wool beat poet. 90% of the time, he recited his poetry. Some were 100 lines.

Apparently, he’s also a fiction writer, but he didn’t talk about that—at all. 

Luckily, he didn’t ‘slam’. (Slamming poetry is turning poems into a performance art, common among modern beat poets.)

Some of the people there were big fans of his and thoroughly enjoyed the whole thing (it was easy to tell that much just from the insightful questions they were asking). Others were jocks with worksheets, there to fulfill some kind of college coursework. There was even an old biker dude there, complete with long, silvery-grey hair, lots of fading tattoos, and a frayed sleeveless denim vest.

I’m willing to bet most of them have never been to a real coffee-house poetry recital; the motley crowd clapped for applause instead of snapping their fingers. ;D

The guy that introduced Mr. Davenport claimed his writing could ‘dazzle us with verbs’ (Boy, do I hate the word ‘dazzle’). And that we had to be careful reading him since the words on his pages were liable to ‘burn our eyes’ on account they were like ‘flint rocks striking together, throwing up sparks’. 

…I guess I just didn’t get it.

Now I can appreciate Jack Kerouac and other poets of the beat movement. I even own a copy of On the Road, but I’m not so much into modern beat poets. I can definitely see its place in the context of the 1960’s, but hearing a middle-aged guy in 2009 wax poetics of his divorce and Elvis and cusswords and fishing and cowboys and rifles and booze … isn’t really my cup o’ tea.

I did agree with some of his sentiments, though, such as his stating that in order for art to be art, you have to start with something stable, do something unexpected to destabilize it, and then let it transform into something re-stabilized and new.

Afterwards, I got to meet a few interesting people. One was the director of the writing department at my college. After we spoke a bit, he suggested I should start a writing group. :) The other was a girl who expressed interest in starting one with me, and we exchanged emails. (If you’re reading this, email me!)

Oh, and last night, I entered a poem into a contest. And a short story into a contest. Let’s see what happens. …

« « NPI Day 2 | NPI Day 4 » »


9 Comments »

  1. “flint rocks striking together, throwing up sparks”.. not the most creative way to describe someone’s writing. lol kinda weird.

    At least you got to meet some cool people. :) Would be really interesting to start a writing group. Are you considering it?

    Btw, my favorite beat poet would have to be John G. Rives. Although, I don’t know many others, lol.. you should check him out. :P

    Good luck on your submissions! Hope all goes well. Which poem/story did you send in?

    Comment by Latrina — March 3, 2009 @ 3:53 pm


  2. @Latrina: Hi!!!
    @ q1. Yep, I’m considering starting a writing group. It would be easier to start a college-based one because I’d only have to manage it til the end of the semester, LOL.
    @ q2. John G. Rives…that name sounds familiar. I’ll check him out.
    @ q3. I did some fine-tuning on ‘Nymph of the Glade’ and ‘En Prise’ and sent them off :)
    I have a feeling both will do well.

    Comment by Nick Enlowe — March 3, 2009 @ 5:09 pm


  3. My favorite Rives videos for you, Nick:

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bZsmneEtdWU
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ipfqKyxm5Hc
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LbtVepS53t0

    Comment by christopher. — March 3, 2009 @ 6:54 pm


  4. Where can we get a hold of this poem/story of yours? If we can, that is. :) I looked around your blog but can’t find them, I know I remember En Prise! Can’t remember if I read it or just remembered you talking about.

    Anyways, would love to read them sometimes if you’re willing to share.

    Comment by Latrina — March 3, 2009 @ 8:15 pm


  5. @Trina: Nope, you’ve only read my very raw 1st version of Big Blue. And I guess now you’ve read my Five Rings prologue, too.
    I posted Nymph a long time ago.
    But check your mail. :)

    Comment by Nick Enlowe — March 3, 2009 @ 9:39 pm


  6. @christopher: oh yeah! I’ve seen Rives before. He’s very good. Funny, clever, and kinda cool.

    Comment by Nick Enlowe — March 3, 2009 @ 9:40 pm


  7. Sigh… the search on my page won’t work no matter how much I fool around with it.
    I opened up a trouble thread at
    http://wordpress.org/support/topic/248014
    But nobody ever replied.
    And now it looks like it’s not returning any results anyway. :(
    Anybody know of a search widget or something I could put up here instead?

    Comment by Nick Enlowe — March 3, 2009 @ 10:00 pm


  8. I noticed it wasn’t working for me, seems like no matter what I searched for it displayed no results — odd. If you want, you can email me your search.php code and I can take a look at it. Can’t guarantee I can fix it, but I can always try! :)

    Comment by Latrina — March 4, 2009 @ 9:43 am


  9. whoa thanks Trina!
    check your email again. :)

    Comment by Nick Enlowe — March 4, 2009 @ 3:55 pm



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